tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post7175261877347788898..comments2023-05-06T08:20:01.841-05:00Comments on Steal Tomorrow: Flash Fiction Extra: UnidentifiedAnn (bunnygirl)http://www.blogger.com/profile/04938134750150653386noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-69490512022711854732010-04-11T17:19:28.508-05:002010-04-11T17:19:28.508-05:00Gripping. I want to know more. Lot's more.
...Gripping. I want to know more. Lot's more.<br /><br />My Retreat Entry: <a href="http://grandmas-goulash.blogspot.com/2010/04/convictions-installment-12.html" rel="nofollow">Convictions #12</a>Grandmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10182296233823884179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-33443515039836954132010-04-11T12:46:33.132-05:002010-04-11T12:46:33.132-05:00You placed the reader right into the run down hous...You placed the reader right into the run down house with them, nice details with the fallen ceiling plaster and the smell of the broken pipe. I agree with Thom, great work mixing their harsh reality with thoughts of better times past.Jay R. Thurstonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12369000584179598973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-83821349736892477372010-04-10T19:49:47.768-05:002010-04-10T19:49:47.768-05:00Julie, an explanation of the pandemic retrovirus i...Julie, an explanation of the pandemic retrovirus is in the sidebar, or you can follow this link: <a href="http://stealtomorrow.blogspot.com/2008/05/telo-what-is-it-telo-is-highly_19.html" rel="nofollow">Telo</a>Ann (bunnygirl)https://www.blogger.com/profile/04938134750150653386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-73271255682587568932010-04-10T17:24:25.826-05:002010-04-10T17:24:25.826-05:00Bear with me if you would, please. I am searching ...Bear with me if you would, please. I am searching for a pathway.<br /><br />Is this set in the future, a future that has undergone somethng catastrophic? What sort of genre would it fit, do you think?<br /><br />How come the pandemic does not kill the kids, just the adults?Juliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09513648613788716017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-45582414223641852622010-04-09T22:24:12.339-05:002010-04-09T22:24:12.339-05:00I enjoyed reading this and had to laugh at cans wi...I enjoyed reading this and had to laugh at cans with no labels. When I was little my stepfather worked for a grocery store and sometimes brought home those surprise cans and it was always an adventure.Calico Crazyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02877107683027950258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-26085085025776537882010-04-09T20:20:27.637-05:002010-04-09T20:20:27.637-05:00I loved it!
waves of oceans in my glassI loved it!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/04/waves-of-oceans-in-my-glass.html" rel="nofollow">waves of oceans in my glass</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-88207990599669435582010-04-09T13:24:12.372-05:002010-04-09T13:24:12.372-05:00I, too, want to know what's in those cans. My ...I, too, want to know what's in those cans. My imagination is in overdrive.<br /><br />Great tug at the heartstrings - the memories, the nostalgia. You've captured the emotions of those left behind in this apocalyptic world very well :)Janethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13297537075103893956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-50324610685982425412010-04-09T10:34:01.645-05:002010-04-09T10:34:01.645-05:00Great, but now I want to know what's in the ca...Great, but now I want to know what's in the cans, mostly if it's really food.Alice Audreyhttp://www.aliceaudrey.com/?page_id=4029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-77542919935133556102010-04-08T18:33:55.422-05:002010-04-08T18:33:55.422-05:00I really like Cassie and I like that you showed Le...I really like Cassie and I like that you showed Leila as a little stronger here too.Dee Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-76378225562061765092010-04-08T13:23:50.372-05:002010-04-08T13:23:50.372-05:00I want to know what's in those cans... (you...I want to know what's in those cans... (you'll notice I'm not going near Cassie's memories and longings)Susan Helene Gottfriedhttp://westofmars.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-41024890338402180842010-04-08T08:35:48.930-05:002010-04-08T08:35:48.930-05:00You've done a great job mixing the toughness o...You've done a great job mixing the toughness of a survivor vs. the memories and longing of the past. I love both your writing streams, but this one has real guts.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-67909508645067402282010-04-08T00:35:29.673-05:002010-04-08T00:35:29.673-05:00Great job. Whew. This one brought tears to my ey...Great job. Whew. This one brought tears to my eyes, and I want to give Cassie a hug.Thomma Lynhttp://www.thommalyngrindstaff.com/stories/noreply@blogger.com