tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post1352363805503150507..comments2023-05-06T08:20:01.841-05:00Comments on Steal Tomorrow: Flash Fiction Extra: Double-DealingAnn (bunnygirl)http://www.blogger.com/profile/04938134750150653386noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-91843276793490393042010-07-05T02:12:11.067-05:002010-07-05T02:12:11.067-05:00@Susan: I might do some more Cuervo stories. He d...@Susan: I might do some more Cuervo stories. He dies in the novel, though, a victim of his own double-dealing.Ann (bunnygirl)http://www.ampino.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-80240160863009361592010-07-03T20:53:57.486-05:002010-07-03T20:53:57.486-05:00Opportunity knocked, huh?
I could grow to like C...Opportunity knocked, huh? <br /><br />I could grow to like Cuervo. Will we see more of him?Susan Helene Gottfriedhttp://westofmars.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-48096431626140308922010-06-26T06:57:17.981-05:002010-06-26T06:57:17.981-05:00Great pacing - you included some backstory (names,...Great pacing - you included some backstory (names, rumors), but the story didn't get weighed down by it. I need to take some lessons ;)<br /><br /><i>Today’s visitor was a greasy-haired teenager who had once gone by the prosaic name of Craig but now insisted he be called Spike.</i> I can imagine many teenagers doing this if the world changed and they were left on their own!Janethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13297537075103893956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-63646151973008454052010-06-24T08:34:54.501-05:002010-06-24T08:34:54.501-05:00The dialogue was spot-on and really added to creat...The dialogue was spot-on and really added to creating just the right scene for this.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-90205924704948350722010-06-23T20:36:50.581-05:002010-06-23T20:36:50.581-05:00Terrific, as always. Your writing talent is huge!Terrific, as always. Your writing talent is huge!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-39019076683083492462010-06-23T16:50:38.734-05:002010-06-23T16:50:38.734-05:00Wow, this is really good. I like the futuristic as...Wow, this is really good. I like the futuristic aspect a lot.Lesliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08687453746419860527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-24596982933768609712010-06-23T15:41:24.496-05:002010-06-23T15:41:24.496-05:00He's just asking for trouble. Those Pharms ar...He's just asking for trouble. Those Pharms aren't good to mess with. Too many Kevorks in the mix. and not the good ones like Galahad.Alice Audreyhttp://www.aliceaudrey.com/?page_id=4029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-79850511146641263972010-06-23T15:29:26.235-05:002010-06-23T15:29:26.235-05:00Great job -- gritty, and spot-on characterization ...Great job -- gritty, and spot-on characterization and dialogue.Thomma Lynhttp://www.thommalyngrindstaff.com/stories/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-53472673127523441182010-06-23T14:54:49.443-05:002010-06-23T14:54:49.443-05:00i really like this. I'd like to know how he w...i really like this. I'd like to know how he will continue his little farce before they discover the fraud. <br />very futuristic. Reminded me of the movie "The book of Eli"Daily Panichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06179183072566661932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-30350793581751618542010-06-23T12:31:26.940-05:002010-06-23T12:31:26.940-05:00Hoo Boy, that was good....Hoo Boy, that was good....markhttp://radio-nowhere.org/nb/noreply@blogger.com