tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post229403422820604284..comments2023-05-06T08:20:01.841-05:00Comments on Steal Tomorrow: Flash Fiction Extra: On TargetAnn (bunnygirl)http://www.blogger.com/profile/04938134750150653386noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-18973653791787223932010-04-06T15:46:53.267-05:002010-04-06T15:46:53.267-05:00I finished Stealing Time and loved it - I will be ...I finished Stealing Time and loved it - I will be writing about it soon. I loved this little peek into Julilla and Alex's relationship. She is such a great character.Dee Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-81976753292281038722010-04-06T10:54:33.143-05:002010-04-06T10:54:33.143-05:00Very layered and rich with character detail. Reall...Very layered and rich with character detail. Really enjoyed it!Julia Phillips Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-74896187086041737552010-04-05T17:13:49.885-05:002010-04-05T17:13:49.885-05:00I could just feel the tension of that moment betwe...I could just feel the tension of that moment between them. You've told a lot of story in just a small space.<br /><br />So happy that you're part of the Weekend Writer's Retreat.Grandmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10182296233823884179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-2572298747860435492010-04-05T15:55:01.605-05:002010-04-05T15:55:01.605-05:00Intriguing, I wish there was more. Thanks for sig...Intriguing, I wish there was more. Thanks for signing on at the <a href="http://weekendwritersretreat.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Weekend Writer's Retreat</a>.Calico Crazyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02877107683027950258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-1845575700937184082010-04-05T08:35:59.190-05:002010-04-05T08:35:59.190-05:00I love this story, and am left wanting to read the...I love this story, and am left wanting to read the rest!Carinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12976869000808518440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-55110950534231291842010-04-04T21:19:41.475-05:002010-04-04T21:19:41.475-05:00What's wrong with having an affair with your m...What's wrong with having an affair with your mentor? <br /><br />Working with firearms and playing with fire are entirely different aren't they???Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-36486102268056085972010-04-04T17:28:45.706-05:002010-04-04T17:28:45.706-05:00Will he, won't he? Something to look forward t...Will he, won't he? Something to look forward to.Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-25340090963039467122010-04-04T16:33:14.876-05:002010-04-04T16:33:14.876-05:00Great job, my friend! Fantastic character develop...Great job, my friend! Fantastic character development, chemistry between Julilla and Alex, and an excellent take on "mentor."Thomma Lynhttp://www.thommalyngrindstaff.com/stories/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-53353565538627191642010-04-04T15:51:59.110-05:002010-04-04T15:51:59.110-05:00Old Grizz gets a little nervous about humans learn...Old Grizz gets a little nervous about humans learning to shoot but is aware that it is necessary. Good development of story. created interest as to what is next. hope she doesn't use her skill to shoot at ugly old Grizzly Bears.George S Battyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15407137341843413701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-60456647345399772822010-04-04T14:27:12.210-05:002010-04-04T14:27:12.210-05:00Great piece! I love the characterization and the l...Great piece! I love the characterization and the little bits of her past you've woven in - well done. <br /><br />Couple of favorite lines:<br /><i>“I know.” Did he think she was blind and couldn’t see the marks in the paper for herself? “It doesn’t happen at long range. Give me a break.”</i><br /><i>Why was her head suddenly as empty as that of any cheerleader at her now-useless high school, and why this weakness in her knees?</i><br />Perfect :)Janethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13297537075103893956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-25215034461212557642010-04-04T13:50:26.972-05:002010-04-04T13:50:26.972-05:00This is just brilliant!This is just brilliant!keiths ramblingshttp://keithsramblings.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-10517431260891793812010-04-04T11:19:38.445-05:002010-04-04T11:19:38.445-05:00Oh, nice character development!Oh, nice character development!Alice Audreyhttp://www.aliceaudrey.com/?page_id=4029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-64163649628890071902010-04-04T08:38:39.384-05:002010-04-04T08:38:39.384-05:00you shrilled me!
Merciless Mentoryou shrilled me!<br /><br /><a href="http://2short2sweet.blogspot.com/2010/04/merciless-mentor.html" rel="nofollow">Merciless Mentor</a>Americanising Desihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04089753612782157378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-57845327333837443292010-04-04T06:45:02.996-05:002010-04-04T06:45:02.996-05:00Oooooh Julilla and Alex....beware....dangerous ter...Oooooh Julilla and Alex....beware....dangerous territory.linda mayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17426368991644308588noreply@blogger.com