tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post6015993670772195898..comments2023-05-06T08:20:01.841-05:00Comments on Steal Tomorrow: CHAPTER FOUR - PART TWOAnn (bunnygirl)http://www.blogger.com/profile/04938134750150653386noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-25302017834138743042010-04-05T11:39:35.104-05:002010-04-05T11:39:35.104-05:00Patience, Grasshopper. They'll get around to ...Patience, Grasshopper. They'll get around to farming soon enough. :-)Ann (bunnygirl)https://www.blogger.com/profile/04938134750150653386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-1226712227276963072010-04-05T11:32:40.678-05:002010-04-05T11:32:40.678-05:00Labor needed outside of the city... you know, I wa...Labor needed outside of the city... you know, I was going to say they need to do some farming.Alice Audreyhttp://www.aliceaudrey.com/?page_id=4029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6326445835838355964.post-33219236095698394482008-09-09T19:13:00.000-05:002008-09-09T19:13:00.000-05:00I came via WFG, and I have to say, this is a fairl...I came via WFG, and I have to say, this is a fairly good start. I was reading Dark Matters for a while, and I think your story uses many of the better themes present in DM, but with less off-putting dialogue. At the beginning, I thought the protagonists were younger than they are, and I was worried about similarly plot driven dialogue (as opposed to the character driven kind).<BR/><BR/>Instead, I've been pretty impressed, and you've definitely chosen a simple but effective layout - the pictures work well too.Sebatinskyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14683685409948942908noreply@blogger.com